Hi guys, I'd love some help with this sentence. A bomb has just exploded in the school. people were evacuated and the MC is observing the scene from a safe distance. My description sounds too 'happy' and I can't use 'shrapnel' since I've used it in another place already. Also, the MC is 13 years old.
Here's my sentence:
Students were scattered around the parking lot like a spilled bag of skittles.
ao lot nu bon bon quan ao nu dep yem an cho be ban buon quan ao vest cong so nu cho thue trang phuc da hoi
Any suggestions?
Here's my sentence:
Students were scattered around the parking lot like a spilled bag of skittles.
ao lot nu bon bon quan ao nu dep yem an cho be ban buon quan ao vest cong so nu cho thue trang phuc da hoi
Any suggestions?
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