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clarity_jane
09-29-2005, 10:22 AM
Hey all, now that we are getting closer to chirstmas i thought i would try my hand at writing an original christmas song. Let me know your thoughts/suggestions/critisisms, and if you are interested in writing some music to accompany the lyrics any help would be apprieciated

Clarity xxx


Christmas sure is fun!
Clarity Jane

Verse 1
For 364 days of the year
I await the felling of christmas cheer
wrapping the presents with a bright red bow
The sound of Santa cheering Ho! Ho! Ho!

Chorus
When you bring out the tree
the lights and crackers
when being together is all the matters
I think it's fair to say
we all love Christmas day
A sprinkling of snow upon the lawn
Children arising at the crack of dawn
A special gift for everyone
Christmas sure is fun


Verse 2
And when christmas day is finally here
and the streets are filled with Christmas cheer
Unwrapping the presents, untying the bows
seeing peoples faces all aglow

Chorus
When you bring out the tree
the lights and crackers
when being together is all the matters
I think it's fair to say
we all love Christmas day
A sprinkling of snow upon the lawn
Children arising at the crack of dawn
A special gift for everyone
Christmas sure is fun


Verse 3
Now Christmas time has come to an end
we've enjoyed the time with family and friends
Take down the trees, pack away the bows
wave goodbye to family its time to go

But just remember......

Chorus
When you bring out the tree
the lights and crackers
when being together is all the matters
I think it's fair to say
we all love Christmas day
A sprinkling of snow upon the lawn
Children arising at the crack of dawn
A special gift for everyone
Christmas sure is fun


Words by Clarity Jane

Susie
10-02-2005, 04:14 AM
I really like your song, Clarity. Well done! I noticed a few small things, like felling - I think you meant feeling in V1, L2. V2 L1 s/b be a captial C for Christmas.