View Full Version : Beta for YA fantasy adventure

The Writer
11-16-2010, 02:29 PM

I'm looking for a beta-reader for my 100.000 word YA fantasy adventure, named TALES OF AGORIA.

It's about a boy who sets out to face his destiny in a different dimension foretold by a prophecy, albeit a false one.

My attempt at a query can be found here: http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=196531

Earlier drafts of my first pages can be found here: http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=187614 , http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=189160 , http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=190383

It's not my first draft, but I'm sure I need a lot of tweaking and cutting. It is my first novel, so I'm still at the beginning of my learning-curve.

I'd appreciate any comments you are willing to give; overall impressions or detailed comments are all fine. Starting out with the first few pages or chapter is totally acceptable too, of course.

If you want, I'm up for an honest trade and will do my very best to give my honest opinion about your work.


11-18-2010, 07:55 AM
I'll swap with you. I also have a YA Fantasy, and I would love a new pair of eyes to view it. Send me a message.