View Full Version : Steampunk, romance, & military novel

11-14-2010, 06:19 AM
So far, I'm just a few chapters along. Looking for whatever comments or critiques anyone wishes to make. I'll provide the first three chapters (5k) to anyone willing to take a shot at it. It's tenatively titled For Love and Freedom though I first called it Global Express 188. If a better title comes along, it might change again. Just send me an email or a private message with your email address and I'll send it off.

11-16-2010, 08:44 AM
Sounds interesting. PM sent.

11-24-2010, 08:04 AM
Your novel sounds interesting. Would you like to swap first 3 chapters? I am also working on a steampunk/romance (though not military). It began as a fantasy/romance, and a crit partner suggested I make it steampunk. I've been trying, but I'm not familiar with the genre, and would love someone who is to take a look at my writing.

I'll send you this in a PM, too.