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JayliaDarkness
11-13-2010, 06:19 AM
A few months ago, I completed my manuscript for POINT OF OBLIVION, a YA Fantasy. I queried agents and 2 requested partials. One of those agents wrote back to say it just didn't ring true. I would love to have a new pair of eyes look over the story, and I'll gladly read your manuscript in return.

The novel involves 17-year-old Lock who travels to another Realm to become the assistant to the Record Keeper, who records the history using a magic pen.