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Sargentodiaz
11-04-2010, 09:09 PM
Just finished a major revision and edit of the first novel of my trilogy about Father Junipero Serra and the founding of the California missions. [Most of it was to correctly deal with how the friars taught and spread the Catholic faith to the indians]

I'm not looking for a line-by-line critique but a general commentary on presentation, characters and scene-setting. And, the big question - is it an interesting read? And to whom?

Remember, this is just the first of three and I want each to be swlf-sustaining.

Thanks in advance. :e2coffee:

Gretad08
11-06-2010, 03:01 AM
I sent you a PM :)