Hello Writers,
Like the topic says, I'm looking for someone to read my first chapter 1st draft.
I would like to elaborate the events, but my English grammar skills are terrible, so I have a hard time going forward.
For now I'm mostly looking for a little help with the grammar, maybe I can learn something. I'm not expecting a correction, just a comment on my most usual mistakes. Also what I'm doing wrong with past and present tense would be helpful. But any comment or critique is highly appreciated.
Again, I'm not looking for a complete correction, just pointers as to what I should read up on.
Here are the specifics:
<2500 words
Sci-Fi, action/suspense.
Thanks in advance,
Protomatic.
Like the topic says, I'm looking for someone to read my first chapter 1st draft.
I would like to elaborate the events, but my English grammar skills are terrible, so I have a hard time going forward.
For now I'm mostly looking for a little help with the grammar, maybe I can learn something. I'm not expecting a correction, just a comment on my most usual mistakes. Also what I'm doing wrong with past and present tense would be helpful. But any comment or critique is highly appreciated.
Again, I'm not looking for a complete correction, just pointers as to what I should read up on.
Here are the specifics:
<2500 words
Sci-Fi, action/suspense.
Thanks in advance,
Protomatic.