View Full Version : Need Beta for YA Urban Fantasy

The Kidd
10-18-2010, 09:02 PM
I'm looking for someone to go over pacing, plot, consistency and also tell me if my characters stay well, in character. Other than that whatever comments you have would be fine. This is my 2nd draft and I’m trying to work out the kinks before I tackle grammar. I would be up for a swap if you have a YA or MG story under 100k.

First chapter can be found here. (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=5435678#post5435678)

I now have three beta readers. Thank you for giving this a look :) May need one or two more at a later time.