View Full Version : Beta wanted: MG Adventure (~75 pages)

10-09-2010, 09:03 PM
A potential agent wanted me to revise and rewrite the beginning of my MG adventure, in order to have less setup and get the "adventure part" started sooner. I've cut out huge chunks, moved around stuff, and now think I have a much stronger opening to my book. But I'd like a few eyes on it to make sure it all still makes sense. If anyone is interested in looking at my first 75 pages, please let me know - the general plot is about a 12yr old girl and her family on an adventure in the antarctic.


10-13-2010, 06:41 AM
If you're just looking for general comments/reader reactions, I would be glad to take a look at it, abc. I remember your query from writeoncon. It sounds like a great premise.