View Full Version : Any fantasy tween writersk out there?

The Grump
10-07-2010, 08:41 PM
My characters are borderline YA, and I need a beta reader for a fantasy novel. My current critiquers/betas are tied up with other projects. [I owe them ... and they haven't finished their works.]

Anyone care to share/critique/beta a first chapter and see if we're compatible? Heads Up: I tend to comment as if I was looking at my own work so you might think I'm too tough.

Pitch [Sort of]: Abused teen becomes entangled in a conflict between two fey factions when she tries to rescue an imprisoned hobgoblin who saved her from an abandoned mine.

The Grump
10-10-2010, 07:55 PM
Found a beta reader to exchange with.

Yeah, noticed the typo in the headline as soon as I clicked "post".