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SciFiHorrorDude
09-26-2010, 01:18 AM
Hi, I'm new to the forums. I came because I wanted someone to take a look at a story I wrote for a Religion and Science Fiction course I took last year. I was thinking about trying to submit it to a SciFi magazine and see how that works out. But before I do that, I would greatly appreciate it if someone took a look at it and critiqued it.

The story is about 2300 words long, and it was inspired by a few lines in A Canticle for Leibowitz, specifically the part in the first book where Brother Francis mentions a crusade in post-apocalyptic America. The story essentially focuses on such a crusade, centered around a single character who has a bit of back story as well. I hesitate to say more because the end of the story is my attempt at being Twilight Zoneish.

I will gladly accept any style of critique, save for out right flaming.

Thank you!

mirandashell
09-26-2010, 06:07 PM
You might be better off putting, say, the first half up in the Share Your Work forum. People are more usually willing to crit a bit than the whole work.