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Bethany_Ray
09-25-2010, 08:26 AM
I've had a few beta readers on this already. I'm actually at the query stage, but would like to have another adult writer (not YA) to check this out for me.

I'm needing a ton of help with my query letter, and I would love for someone to be able to read my MS and check it for plot holes. I'm willing for it to be torn apart. I'm also willing to do some MAJOR rewrites if that is needed.

I'm desperately needing someone honest, who knows how to deliver criticism without holding back. I've had a ton of readers, all of them sweet as sugar and YA writers.

I'd be willing to send you the query and first chapter so you find out if this is something you'd be interested in.

I'm 150% willing to recompense.

Themes: Telepathy/mind control, childhood abuse, bi-sexual MC, adult abduction, torture, mafia, power struggles, murder.

Rough language, violence and two very, very softcore sex scenes.