Crazy Dream (Is this a good song or not?)

Herb

Crazy Dream



Verse 1



Last night I had this crazy dream

You were right next to me

We were in a small town

And you were in a wedding gown

You were sayin that I do

I was sayin it right back to you



Chorus



Can you see I’m in love with you

This feeling I can not undo

Oh baby don’t you feel it to

Oh come on and fall in love with me



Verse 2



I had this crazy dream

With you right next to me

We were makin love right

Oh it was out of site

You said you loved me

I said it right back to you



Chorus



Can you see I’m in love with you

This feeling I can not undo

Oh baby don’t you feel it to

Oh come on and fall in love with me



Chorus



Can you see I’m in love with you

This feeling I can not undo

Oh baby don’t you feel it to

Oh come on and fall in love with me

Oh come on and fall in love with me

Oh baby fall in love with me
 

JustRite

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HI,
With the disclaimer that I know NOTHING about songwriting - haven't ever written one (well, just one that I was about to post here), I like it. But I do think the Verse 2 is too weak. But the rest of it is very good.
 
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