View Full Version : Beta for a Mystery/Thiller WIP

08-24-2010, 08:20 AM
I'm currently working on a mystery novel and I would like someone who is at least familiar with the genre. I would prefer to send it a chapter at a time and I will consider a swap. Here's a short blurb of the novel.

Alexandra Bedloe was not the kind of person you would expect to find in the middle of a murder investigation. The daughter of a cop, she knew to stay away from anything that could put her in a bad situation. That all changed one night when walking home from a club. She finds a murdered man in the alley and calls the cops. Lest does she know that it's only the first in a long line of murders to come. And now the killer has his eye on her, sending her letters and "humanly" gifts, he taunts her. Now she and Detective Chase Madsen must race against the clock to save her life and countless other lives.