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sadiemay
07-31-2010, 08:15 PM
I'm looking for a reader (or two) for Rusted Red Fenders (complete, 62,000 words). Here's the synopsis: http://lost-n-fiction.blogspot.com/2009/06/rusted-red-fenders.html

I'm looking for some general opinions on flow, character development, reader interest, if the whole premise works, etc. Also, if any lines/paragraphs jump out as not working or sounding awkward, I wouldn't mind knowing about that too.

I would be happy to swap. I read just about anything (even YA fantasy :)).