View Full Version : Beta for polished YA Fantasy

07-21-2010, 11:27 PM
I'm looking for a round of beta readers. I've had betas before but I want a few new sets of eyes. I need to know if the changes I've made all make sense before I start querying. I don't think there's a lot of punctuation and grammar. I'm mostly looking for believability, does it pull you in, is it written well, etc.

Just FYI, this isn't urban fantasy. It's more sword and sorcerer, but not really high fantasy (there are no dragons, elves, dwarves, etc.). And it has a definite romantic element.

I'll be ready to send it out sometime next week and I'd really love if you could get it back to me within a few weeks. It's a pretty easy, quick read.

PM me or email at shari_d_lambert@hotmail.com.


07-28-2010, 10:52 AM
I'd help if we could exchange? I have a YA fantasy as well.