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I need someone to read over my stories and check for Grammer and give their oppinion. I dont care if you are cruel or blunt about it at all so long as you tell me exactly what you mean when you point out that something is wrong.
I started writing this one years ago:
Title: Oh No! The King!
Summery: Serenth is a Knight determined for his king to be back on the throne, and to defeat the eminent Evil. Trenton is the mysterious ruler himself. Too Bad he's just a flirty man who doesn't see the gravity of the situation: or so Serenth thinks.
With intrigue, love, and tragedy mixed into their lives our crew will find that getting their beloved king back on the throne is just one step to righting the wrongs and evils of the past... And is looking to be much harder than anyone would dread to think. (I know.. It's a horrible summary but I couldnt' think of what else to put. I started this years ago and I'm now 18 almost 19...)
Genre: It is a romance, with adventrue and fantasy
Note: Homosexual content. Not going to be a strong part, it's just a "side flavor" I guess.
This one is a more Recent story:
Title: Worst Day Ever (again.. suckish but I was at a loss)
summary: Some people could be so lucky to go to school, make friends, and then graduate, but me and MY beautiful self obviously have to have it the hard way. Between my crush, the attractive and RUDE neighbor, and cruel pranks, what's a guy to do?
Genre: Romance, and it is going to be an "Erotica"
Note: The homosexuality is a main theme in this; a strong main theme
Note on both of these stories: BOTH of these are LONG pieces
I started writing this one years ago:
Title: Oh No! The King!
Summery: Serenth is a Knight determined for his king to be back on the throne, and to defeat the eminent Evil. Trenton is the mysterious ruler himself. Too Bad he's just a flirty man who doesn't see the gravity of the situation: or so Serenth thinks.
With intrigue, love, and tragedy mixed into their lives our crew will find that getting their beloved king back on the throne is just one step to righting the wrongs and evils of the past... And is looking to be much harder than anyone would dread to think. (I know.. It's a horrible summary but I couldnt' think of what else to put. I started this years ago and I'm now 18 almost 19...)
Genre: It is a romance, with adventrue and fantasy
Note: Homosexual content. Not going to be a strong part, it's just a "side flavor" I guess.
This one is a more Recent story:
Title: Worst Day Ever (again.. suckish but I was at a loss)
summary: Some people could be so lucky to go to school, make friends, and then graduate, but me and MY beautiful self obviously have to have it the hard way. Between my crush, the attractive and RUDE neighbor, and cruel pranks, what's a guy to do?
Genre: Romance, and it is going to be an "Erotica"
Note: The homosexuality is a main theme in this; a strong main theme
Note on both of these stories: BOTH of these are LONG pieces
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