I've read that one is supposed to have a line that grabs an agent's attention when submitting querries.
Would this one work - or would it scare them off?
Hello!
Did you know that the Bible teaches that demons took the form of human males, had sex with human women and produced a super race called the Nephilim? Reference Genesis, Chapter 6, Verses 1 - 4, New American Standard Bible.
I'm not using the line just to get attention - the story is actually the basis of my book.
Would this one work - or would it scare them off?
Hello!
Did you know that the Bible teaches that demons took the form of human males, had sex with human women and produced a super race called the Nephilim? Reference Genesis, Chapter 6, Verses 1 - 4, New American Standard Bible.
I'm not using the line just to get attention - the story is actually the basis of my book.