I'm sure you've all heard the writer's saying "show, don't tell" many times before.
But how many of us know exactly where to draw the line between showing and telling?
The reason I've started this thread is lately I've been confused as to what works best. I've entered into around seven short story competitions already, but no result. I keep thinking that the content is fairly strong, and I've had people agree with me most of the time, but I don't seem to be able to satisfy the judges. Seeing's as I'm relatively new to short story competitions, only been entering them for about a year and three quarters, I'm just not sure whether the judges want me to show, tell or do both?
I've been working on a short story for a couple of weeks now and it's finished, I'm just touching up on it, but I've gone and risked including show and tell. I've got great (and honest) responses from people I know but I'm still wondering whether I did the right thing or not.
It's a deep story, something I don't do very often and I think it needs both. I was just wondering if anyone with more short story competition success could tell me what the judges really want in relation to the subject.
Cheers.
But how many of us know exactly where to draw the line between showing and telling?
The reason I've started this thread is lately I've been confused as to what works best. I've entered into around seven short story competitions already, but no result. I keep thinking that the content is fairly strong, and I've had people agree with me most of the time, but I don't seem to be able to satisfy the judges. Seeing's as I'm relatively new to short story competitions, only been entering them for about a year and three quarters, I'm just not sure whether the judges want me to show, tell or do both?
I've been working on a short story for a couple of weeks now and it's finished, I'm just touching up on it, but I've gone and risked including show and tell. I've got great (and honest) responses from people I know but I'm still wondering whether I did the right thing or not.
It's a deep story, something I don't do very often and I think it needs both. I was just wondering if anyone with more short story competition success could tell me what the judges really want in relation to the subject.
Cheers.