Need Betas for completed middle-grade SUPERHERO 150pgs

Specifically, I need people to judge the story arc, as that is my biggest weakness (and the most important part, right?).

I already got a request for the full based on a query contest, and need help getting it in shiny shape as quickly as possible.

I know, I know...patience.

Please help if you can. I'd happily return the favor, especially for other middle-graders or YA.

Any mentor types that might be reading this, I am very humble and would love to bask in your wisdom.

*Oh, it's kind of a boy book, if that makes a difference to people. I hope it transcends gender, though.

Wow. Blunt.

40,000. And I have done tons of research. This is my 4th novel.

Are you interested in being a beta? Sounds like you know how to be up-front.

Fans of Disney's Sky High or Matthew Cody's Powerless will like this book. It's about Robert, a villain-in-training who is the joke of Dark Academy. In order to graduate, he has to complete three special projects to prove his villain-hood. He has an evil twin named Rupert and a very non-villany superpower: repairing things--anything--with a wink.

He thinks Rupert is his biggest problem, but when he meets a group of teenage heroes from the other side of the forest, he finds out that someone far more dangerous is gaining power.

Robert has to choose between loyalty to his family and being true to the hero within...and he has to do it before both sides of the forest are under the true villain's complete control.

Inkblot, I would LOVE to go to SCBWI, but there's no way I can afford it this year. *sobs like a baby*

Maybe next year...

Inkblot said:

Also, Katrina, I'd send you a private message but I don't know how. Do you?

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Did you get my private message explaining how to private message?

Click on my username on the side of this comment and a dropdown box includes private message.