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95,000 word Historical-Fantasy, The Nymph's Heart.

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Seeking a Beta reader for a historical Fantasy. The Nymph's Heart http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=181914&page=2

It is set in Miami Florida. The story is told in third person limited POV in three time periods 1567, 1926, and 2005. The novel deals with The fountain of Youth, Ponce De Leon's undead soul and a water Nymph the local Indian tribe calls the Blue Lady.

Contains violence,drug use,and a love story, but no sex.

If you are curious I have posted two chapters in the SYW folder it is under Interstices. I am curious about how the plot holds together and any other comments you are kind enough, or unkind enough to make.
 
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Sounds interesting. I like the title. Have you set up a list of potential publishers ?
 

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I don't even want to think about that until I see if she fly's, or for that matter if she draws flies. As for the titile I was going with The Fountain but that gave away to much of the plot. Glad you like it though.
 
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