I have my work posted on authonomy.com (A writing website hosted by Harper Collins) and I received this comment from a fellow writer-
"A slight tweak I would suggest is to watch out for words and phrases at the end of sentences that are not really needed and reduce the strenghth of what is being said.
Speech stands alone, never tag on action by someone else at the end of a speech."
Is this set in stone or should I just take it as a suggestion?
"A slight tweak I would suggest is to watch out for words and phrases at the end of sentences that are not really needed and reduce the strenghth of what is being said.
Speech stands alone, never tag on action by someone else at the end of a speech."
Is this set in stone or should I just take it as a suggestion?