View Full Version : Hard R Comedy Screenplay About to Hit Hollywood

04-15-2010, 09:31 PM

So I'm about to "go to the mattresses" with a script that I'm just finishing (1st draft anyway).

Could really use a hardcore beta reader who's into screenplays/movies to give it to me straight. Hold the sugar-coating. Seriously. Hollywood can be brutal. Got to have the equivalent of the "Hurt Locker" suit on to not end up in a fetal position under the desk, eating your hands and making wimpering noises.

Should have it ready for ripping apart--er,I mean reading--next week. In exchange, I can provide same for any kind of writing, but I have the most experience with screenplays.

Please send me a private message telling me how you roll, and I'll respond with the logline/query.


04-16-2010, 01:33 PM
I think you can share yur work here ,or if you don't mind we will swap our scripts .
I am an Indian English writer. I do critic in Zoetrope and Trigger
and it is always easy to find mistakes