Hi there,
I would like to get feedback on my YA Paranormal novel, THE GHOST WRITER, from readers who don't personally know me. I’ve had a few critique buddies give me feedback, but I'm hoping others can provide even more insight. I would be happy to read someone else's manuscript in exchange for looking at mine.
Basically, I'm looking for a couple people who are willing to read a YA Paranormal and can give me feedback and constructive criticism on the pacing, plot, characters, etc. I've done an extensive line edit of the book so grammar-wise all should be well, but if a confusing phrase, misspelled word, or dangling participle pop up, I'd certainly like to know.
If you'd be interested in reading THE GHOST WRITER, please let me know! Thank you in advance!
-MarcyKate
www.marcykate.com
I would like to get feedback on my YA Paranormal novel, THE GHOST WRITER, from readers who don't personally know me. I’ve had a few critique buddies give me feedback, but I'm hoping others can provide even more insight. I would be happy to read someone else's manuscript in exchange for looking at mine.
Basically, I'm looking for a couple people who are willing to read a YA Paranormal and can give me feedback and constructive criticism on the pacing, plot, characters, etc. I've done an extensive line edit of the book so grammar-wise all should be well, but if a confusing phrase, misspelled word, or dangling participle pop up, I'd certainly like to know.
THE GHOST WRITER Summary (60,000 words):
Eighteen-year-old Tessa James can’t even watch Casper the Friendly Ghost without nightmares, so when letters written in a foreign language appear on her nightstand she does her damnedest to ignore the implications. She has enough ghosts of her own, thank you very much.
Soon Tessa realizes the letters are pieces of a diary, and the tale of Ava Dubois, a runaway millgirl turned rising starlet, begins to unravel. As Tessa is unwillingly drawn into Ava’s past, connections to the present become stark—and scary. Manchester’s Castle Theatre, her employer and once Ava's, is about to produce Hamlet, the very play canceled by Ava’s untimely death in 1935. A bizarre series of accidents plague the theatre staff, while the steady stream of letters and rumors of ghosts force Tessa into a dangerous game. A séance goes horribly awry, a boiler room acts as though it has a mind of its own, and an entire cast of otherworldly inhabitants—including a poltergeist willing to kill to protect his secret—come out to play. Tessa wants no part of it, but the spirits won’t leave her alone, nor will the suspicious detective investigating the accidents. With the body count piling up—in the past and present—Tessa must checkmate her ghosts and Ava's if she wants to live long enough to have a future.
If you'd be interested in reading THE GHOST WRITER, please let me know! Thank you in advance!
-MarcyKate
www.marcykate.com