View Full Version : Beta Wanted for MG Adventure Novel - 40k

04-10-2010, 11:52 PM
After getting great advice from a beta reader on a draft last spring, I have finally made all the corrections/suggestions, and fleshed out this final(ish) draft of my novel. At the moment it's 213 pages and 40,000 words.

I'm looking for a fresh set of eyes on this, and will gladly take a no-holds-back critique.

This is a middle grade adventure, about a 12-yr old girl, her twin sister, and her Father, who embark on an adventure to Antarctica in an attempt to end global warming. (As you can tell, I need help writing my summary for my query letter - which I plan to work on again, now that I've got this draft finished).

I can send the first couple chapters if you want to check it out before committing.