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Beta reader needed for 26k fantasy story (for 10-12 year olds)

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I'm looking for someone to read my 26k manuscript and offer feedback and advice. I've been told by an expert (who spent most her career critiquing fiction for this kind of age group) that it is for 10-12 year olds. The protagonist is 16.

It's fantasy, think of a sort of cross between Doctor Who and Harry Potter. Exciting, fast paced, time travel, mind control.

She gave me some points to work on, I have completed the edits I agree need changing but am unsure about a few of her points. A second opinion (or even more opinions!) would be greatly appreciated.

I'm happy to read other manuscripts of similar length and offer feedback.

Reply here or PM and I can send you the document! :)
 
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