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Whenever a new character is introduced in a book, the author always provides a short description. Here's an example of my own that I wrote myself.
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When I went to McDonald's for supper today, I met a familiar face. Waiting to place her order was Judy, a woman I knew from a Get-Together meeting held every last Wednesday of each month at the Partners Office.
Judy is one of the strangest looking people I've ever seen in my life. I'm not exactly sure how old she is, but she's certainly older than me. What's strange about her is her head. It's smaller than mine and if she wasn't a living human being, it could be mistaken for one of those "shrunken heads" sold in some island countries.
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But how much character description is enough, too little, or too much?
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When I went to McDonald's for supper today, I met a familiar face. Waiting to place her order was Judy, a woman I knew from a Get-Together meeting held every last Wednesday of each month at the Partners Office.
Judy is one of the strangest looking people I've ever seen in my life. I'm not exactly sure how old she is, but she's certainly older than me. What's strange about her is her head. It's smaller than mine and if she wasn't a living human being, it could be mistaken for one of those "shrunken heads" sold in some island countries.
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But how much character description is enough, too little, or too much?