Very funny.
By "Decent," I meant "Competently written and probably a good read, though not dazzlingly, mindbendingly awesome." In other words, like most of the stuff I see on the shelves right now. I'm not presumptuous enough to think I'm especially gifted..
The truth is, comparing it to books of known authors is not helpful, because they have followings and it's more likely their followup books will be published. You need to know that it is as good if not better than the debut novels in your genre. So, it's gut check time. You need to objectively decide if your book is as good if not better than the debut books in your genre over the last 5 years - and by good I mean as well crafted and written, and as commercially viable.
And if you're not sure, find some beta readers. But good is no longer, in most cases, good enough.
Thanks. I think I'm having trouble grasping how I can demonstrate commercial viability in a query letter. I've learned from past experience that just describing a good story doesn't seem to be enough..
You don't demonstrate commercially viable in a query - the query is just to hook the agent's interest in the primary story arc and vocie enough to read the pages - and then the pages have to demonstrate it is commercially viable.
The truth is that I've been at this for several years, but I very, VERY rarely get past the query stage. When I do send writing in, I get responses like, "I enjoyed this story, but I didn't fall in love with it." So, I have no idea what to improve or exactly what went wrong. But that might be a topic for another thread.
This, in my opinion, means either not good enough yet or you haven't found the right agent yet. Which is it? Well, how many agents, who rep your genre and are actively building their lists, have you queried? 10? 20? 200?
If you haven't queried all of the agents who rep your genre that you would be happy to have represent you, then you can't know if it's just not good enough yet, or if you just haven't found the right agent yet.
Are you getting any full requests? if not, then it's the writng or the concept.
Are you even getting any partial requests? If not, then it's the writing or the concept, or your query is really bombing.
But even a good query can not land an agent if the book just isn't really good and commercially viable.
I'll second the advice to check out Share Your Work - for your query and your first chapter. But read the sticky threads and some of the critiques before you post.
~suki