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I am having a discussion with somebody about fine details of style. I won't tell you why, with whom, or which bit is whose, because I don't want to bias the vote. Just tell me, if you would, which of these slightly different version of the same scene you prefer.
For an instant she felt that he was freakish and dangerous. She decided in another instant that she was the one who got off on singing about blood and death and was therefore in no position to talk, and she grinned back in a sort of cosy, mutual malice. "Destruction to our enemies, then, Professor. Destruction to our enemies."
For an instant she felt that he was freakish and dangerous: decided in another instant that she was the one who got off on singing about blood and death and was therefore in no position to talk, and grinned back in a sort of cosy, mutual malice. "Destruction to our enemies, then, Prof. Destruction to our enemies."
For an instant she felt that he was freakish and dangerous. She decided in another instant that she was the one who got off on singing about blood and death and was therefore in no position to talk, and she grinned back in a sort of cosy, mutual malice. "Destruction to our enemies, then, Professor. Destruction to our enemies."
For an instant she felt that he was freakish and dangerous: decided in another instant that she was the one who got off on singing about blood and death and was therefore in no position to talk, and grinned back in a sort of cosy, mutual malice. "Destruction to our enemies, then, Prof. Destruction to our enemies."