View Full Version : beta needed for fantasy short story

03-02-2010, 02:06 AM
I have a fantasy short story around 8600 words that I need new eyes on. I would like to get it under 6000 words and need someone to tell me where I am repeating myself, what words are extra and if I've totally messed up my ending.

Two or three people would be great. Please let me know.

It has dragons.