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beta needed for fantasy short story

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ravenlea

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I have a fantasy short story around 8600 words that I need new eyes on. I would like to get it under 6000 words and need someone to tell me where I am repeating myself, what words are extra and if I've totally messed up my ending.

Two or three people would be great. Please let me know.


It has dragons.
 
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