I really could use some help....

Smoothee

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I have a novel entitled Trilogy of Sisters. It is three short stories involving three sets of siblings. I need an opinion and a critique. Below is the first chapter. I love constructive criticism. It allows me to be better. Below is the first chapter.

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This is an all ages board. If you want to post this in "Share your work: erotica" which is for 21+ people only you need to PM me with an age statement. Then I can send you the password. Also, please do not post duplicate posts.
 
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How do i get the password. I have pm'd 2 different mods with my age statement asking for the pass, and have not gotten a response from either.
 
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