Yes, Another One

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Read it, veddy good. I dig stories like this, unexplained phenomena, ordinary people trying to come to terms with the extra ordinary.
 
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Never, ever apologise for your successes. You deserve every one of them. Those who are jealous don't matter and those who are inspired will be pleased for you.

Wack says so.
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Wasn't just the ex-nun you need to watch out for.

*puts on scary sheep face*

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congrats, DG, for the hat trick this week. :snoopy:
 

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Thank you, Dolores. I'm quite certain it will turn into a novel one day. I have a few thousand rough words written so far, but other characters from other stories are demanding to have their tales told first. I don't like to fight with my characters lest they turn turtle and shut up permanently. :)
 

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Ooh, I remember this one and always thought it a wonderful piece partly because it was set in my neck of the woods where it rains all the time but mostly becuase it was just so well-written! Congratulations, Damien!
 

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Yeah, I noticed the cut but the piece lost nothing for that edit so no harm done. I did like that there was a thought where the one guy thinks "I should have tried..." I'm glad that was in there because I either missed it when I did the crit or you added it. It's a silly thing but that was my only nagging concern. I feel kind of like a godmother on this one--totally unwarranted but I'm just so thrilled for you that I can't help it. I hope you can forgive me for wanting to ride your glorious coattails.
 

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Yeah, I noticed the cut but the piece lost nothing for that edit so no harm done. I did like that there was a thought where the one guy thinks "I should have tried..." I'm glad that was in there because I either missed it when I did the crit or you added it. It's a silly thing but that was my only nagging concern. I feel kind of like a godmother on this one--totally unwarranted but I'm just so thrilled for you that I can't help it. I hope you can forgive me for wanting to ride your glorious coattails.

AA, that line is why the location got cut. It wasn't in the original draft, but I think it made it a much stronger piece. And there is nothing to forgive. I appreciate your support. :Hug2:
 

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Hey, I really liked it. Nice work.