More Spanish help

I've had to add a chapter to my WIP, and so my spanish-speaking characters got a bit more page time. Any Spanish-speakers lend me a hand again?

1) I've got a ship captain (while analyzing the screen of the ship's radar) asking something to the effect of "Check the screen again," or "Double check the calibration," or any other similar phrase.

2) "It's just out of range, but it's (a ship) still there, sir!"

3) And I've got a 12-yr old who doesn't know much Spanish, greeting a worker in the morning - is "¡Hola!" good enough?

Thanks!!

Thanks, I tried Babelfish for the other chapters, and had it politely pointed out to me that the Spanish wasn't quite right

abctriplets said:

1) I've got a ship captain (while analyzing the screen of the ship's radar) asking something to the effect of "Check the screen again," or "Double check the calibration," or any other similar phrase.

2) "It's just out of range, but it's (a ship) still there, sir!"

3) And I've got a 12-yr old who doesn't know much Spanish, greeting a worker in the morning - is "¡Hola!" good enough?

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Giving babelfish a try, I get:

1) "Compruebe la pantalla otra vez," or "Compruebe la calibración con minuciosidad"
2) ¡Está apenas fuera de gama, pero todavía está allí, sir!

Again, though, I have no way of knowing if babelfish's direct translation works

Ah thanks so much max, not just for the translation, but also for the joy of learning about "English As She Spoke" for the first time