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I'm running at about a 25% success rate (asking for partials or full ms) and I'm getting kind of frustrated. Maybe its my query. Can someone possibly take a look and see what you think?
Thanks
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Dear Sir or Madam; (I put the specific name when I have it)
Have you ever been part of a team so strong that you carried the memories of that group of people with you for the rest of your life? Did your team do something so extraordinary that, years later it is still talked about? My manuscript One Team One Dream describes that scenario. It is a fact based account of the 1997 William Byrd High School Virginia state championship baseball team, and the achievements, setbacks, downfalls, and ultimately victory. This is the story the way I saw it from the pitcher’s mound, as one of the most sought after pitchers in the state of Virginia.
The market for this book would begin with the people that shared this experience in the Roanoke Valley, including players, students, coaches, parents, and fans. It has garnered some attention from the local media including the Roanoke Times newspaper, the Vinton Messenger newspaper, and the local NBC affiliate WSLS News Channel 10. The story would also reach anyone who has ever been a part of a team or has ever been inspired by teamwork, and exactly how far teammates can take each other regardless of the obstacles. My dedication to my team, as well as my accomplishments on the field, and name recognition in the local community based on these events qualify me to tell this story as it should be told, no punches pulled, no stones left unturned. It will be the first book covering this specific team, so it will certainly peak the interest of everyone in the area.
My manuscript is completed, and is roughly seventy-thousand words, and 280 typescript pages. I am requesting permission to send you a full proposal complete with synopsis, sample chapters, a summary of photographs and the introduction which sets the stage for the entire book.
Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
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Address
Phone #
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Blood Type (Just kidding)
Thanks a bunch!
Thanks
___________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam; (I put the specific name when I have it)
Have you ever been part of a team so strong that you carried the memories of that group of people with you for the rest of your life? Did your team do something so extraordinary that, years later it is still talked about? My manuscript One Team One Dream describes that scenario. It is a fact based account of the 1997 William Byrd High School Virginia state championship baseball team, and the achievements, setbacks, downfalls, and ultimately victory. This is the story the way I saw it from the pitcher’s mound, as one of the most sought after pitchers in the state of Virginia.
The market for this book would begin with the people that shared this experience in the Roanoke Valley, including players, students, coaches, parents, and fans. It has garnered some attention from the local media including the Roanoke Times newspaper, the Vinton Messenger newspaper, and the local NBC affiliate WSLS News Channel 10. The story would also reach anyone who has ever been a part of a team or has ever been inspired by teamwork, and exactly how far teammates can take each other regardless of the obstacles. My dedication to my team, as well as my accomplishments on the field, and name recognition in the local community based on these events qualify me to tell this story as it should be told, no punches pulled, no stones left unturned. It will be the first book covering this specific team, so it will certainly peak the interest of everyone in the area.
My manuscript is completed, and is roughly seventy-thousand words, and 280 typescript pages. I am requesting permission to send you a full proposal complete with synopsis, sample chapters, a summary of photographs and the introduction which sets the stage for the entire book.
Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
Name
Address
Phone #
Blood Type (Just kidding)
Thanks a bunch!