View Full Version : Beta Needed for Chapter Comparisons in Urban Fantasy

01-29-2010, 12:14 PM
I have a completed manuscript, and have been through several drafts. After having another critique, I rewrote the first several chapters of my story, and they were edited a few times as well.
I have mixed feelings about each of the new chapters (now 2 of each of the first 5 chapters) and am in need of someone to read each of the different versions and help me out over all with deciding which route to choose (and over all help with each of them).

The story is about a modern day science that allows people to summon spirit animals (or spirit guides), and several different people/aspects of them. Some of these aspects are government and religious (it's more like a cult, but is a "religion" to them) and how people deal with it.

If anyone is interested, please PM me.