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Day O'
01-24-2010, 09:36 PM

The story is about a boy who is stuck in a nautical fantasy world and his quest to get back home. It has elements of a mystery (he has to figure out clues to get home), an adventure (he has to escape and/or battle several strange creatures), and a ‘coming of age’ (from the final decision he has to make.) It’s 34,000 words.

I’m looking for a quick read through with maybe a couple of paragraphs of comments about the characters, the voice, the plot, motivations, if its interesting, if a scene is boring, etc… grammar and punctuation no. Not that I’m perfect, but at this stage of the ms, I think I need to be looking for that stuff, not a beta reader :)

Please PM if you’re interested, and thanks!

01-24-2010, 10:50 PM
Just sent PM.

03-03-2010, 01:08 AM
sent you a PM.

03-12-2010, 05:24 AM
I'd be willing to read it. Send me a PM.