View Full Version : Beta Needed for YA contemp. Romance

01-22-2010, 04:12 AM
Hello everyone. I'm looking for honest feedback on my contemporary young adult romance, Virginity Thief. Here is the premise:

Mari Abdo is forced by her parents to move to town, and everyone in her new school is in awe of her up and coming movie star status. But Mari’s opinion of the slow farming town is less than kind… until she is rejected by the first boy she is attracted to, Adam, and discovers he is part of the school’s elite club of male virgins.

Determined to prove to Adam that no man can stay a virgin long, Mari employs the help of a few misfit model wannabes to bring down the virginity club.

The book is on the short side of YA, 40,000 words, so it won't be a long read. I'm looking for any help you guys are willing to give me. I'd like someone who doesn't know me personally to take a look. :)

01-22-2010, 11:57 AM
Hey Rachel,

Sure. Sounds interesting, I'd be willing to read it for you :)

PM me, and let me know specifics of what you're after.

Looking fwd to hearing from you,