View Full Version : Paranormal romance- beta needed for 1st chapter.

01-11-2010, 06:14 AM
I need a beta reader for the first chapter of my novel. I'm also going to post it in the share your work, but I'm hoping this beta will stay with me to read the rest of the novel also. I have it written, I just want to get the first chapter read first because it doesn't flow well to me and I would like a fresh set of eyes looking at it.

The summary is that Keaira is a half-succubus, half angel woman. She works for a company that keeps non-humans in check as to not revel their existance. Her five year old daughter gets kidnapped and she has to rely on the Kevan, the son of Aphrodite, to help her find her daughter.

PM me if interested. Thanks.

01-12-2010, 04:41 AM
Sent you a PM. Let me know if you didn't get it. Thanx!

Dorothea May
03-05-2010, 04:56 AM
PM sent. Not sure if you are still looking...