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Rufus Coppertop
12-23-2009, 08:43 AM
I'm halfway through a steampunk preliminary draft which is a prequel to an already completed preliminary draft.

Some of the earlier chapters are more crafted than later ones so far.

What I'm after is less of a line by line critique (although any line by line stuff would be welcome too) and more of a feedback about the general feel of it, the characters, even aesthetic elements.

fadeaccompli
12-28-2009, 04:54 AM
About how soon are you looking for feedback, and how much wordcount is "halfway"? For the sort of response you want, I'd be happy to take a look and give some comments, but it'd likely take me a week or two to read and organize said comments. Longer if "halfway" is above around 50k.

Rufus Coppertop
12-28-2009, 03:10 PM
About how soon are you looking for feedback, and how much wordcount is "halfway"? For the sort of response you want, I'd be happy to take a look and give some comments, but it'd likely take me a week or two to read and organize said comments. Longer if "halfway" is above around 50k.


Thanks for offering.

I'm not in a huge hurry and it would be no more than 30k words.

Thump
12-28-2009, 03:16 PM
I could look at that if it's just about 30K. I do love Steampunk. PM me for my email address if you want me to beta :)

defcon6000
12-29-2009, 03:32 AM
I'll join in too; 30K isn't so much. Just general feedback, right?
PM me and I'll give you my email.

Tedium
12-30-2009, 12:26 PM
I'll give it a go. I do love me some steampunk.

Dr Swann
01-01-2010, 04:47 AM
Hi, I just joined but been lurking for a while. Would be happy to read any steampunk as that's what I try to write! K

Henlen
01-02-2010, 10:06 AM
I'm happy to give it a read if you need anyone else