View Full Version : Mentor needed for crime writing

07-29-2005, 01:37 PM
Hiya guys,
As you might know I'm writing crime and I wonder if there is a published author out there who's willing to take me under his/her wings?
You can read an excerpt of my first novel in the share your work forum to give you an idea on my (in)ability to write.

07-29-2005, 10:39 PM
Clotje, how about posting the link to your SYW piece so interested mentors have easier access?

07-30-2005, 01:02 AM
Thanks for the advice (now why didn't I think of that?!?) Here is the link:


**cross fingers that someone thinks I'm worthy**

07-30-2005, 02:15 AM
I posted my thoughts as to how to make the fire setting a little better. You actually described it very well. I just made a few technical suggestions. You are definitely on the "write" track as to that aspect.

Brady H.