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Hey everyone, I would like some feedback on this fictional illness my story is based on. It's not necessarily caused by a disease. There are no visible symptomps, not even decay, thus making it impossible to tract. I'm not sure if this is relevant, but in this verse, cheap surgery has a large success rate and the biology of the species makes it such that the immunity system is much stronger than real humans.
Anyway, the illness causes one's limbs to be useless and detach itself from the person without any warning. The process is painless and this illness can inflict all persons and animals, hence it may lead to extinction. There is a possibility that this illness is psychological and the story's main characters belong to an organization dedicated to finding the cure to this illness and doing damage control.
Please do point out any contradictions and plotholes, as this will the basis of the entire series and if there's a fatal hole I probably couldn't continue with the plot at all .
Anyway, the illness causes one's limbs to be useless and detach itself from the person without any warning. The process is painless and this illness can inflict all persons and animals, hence it may lead to extinction. There is a possibility that this illness is psychological and the story's main characters belong to an organization dedicated to finding the cure to this illness and doing damage control.
Please do point out any contradictions and plotholes, as this will the basis of the entire series and if there's a fatal hole I probably couldn't continue with the plot at all .