View Full Version : Beta reader needed for romantic suspense

11-27-2009, 11:13 PM
...or suspenseful romance...whatever.

An in-process query draft is here (http://clairegillian.wordpress.com/query-the-previously-undetected-recruiting-error/)

Chapter One draft is here (http://clairegillian.wordpress.com/2009/10/17/chapter-1-of-the-pure/)

Another short excerpt (earlier version) is here (http://clairegillian.wordpress.com/2009/09/29/excerpt-from-the-pure-first-draft/)

It's about 90k words, does have some sex scenes. I'm more interested in getting a read-through for the story and general appeal than a line by line crit.

PM me if you've the time and inclination to help me out. Thanks in advance!

12-05-2009, 07:51 PM
I got one (thank you Gary!)...would still like another, please, please...