I've got a rhyming picture book of 834 words. I would appreciate having some fresh eyes take a look at it and see how the rhymes work, and let me know where you stumble while reading it.
It's about a dinosaur, and is written like Kipling's How the Camel Got Its Hump...in other words, it's a humorous look at how a Stegosaurus might first have grown the plates on its back and spikes on its tail.
I know, I know...rhyming picture books are a hard sell. That's why I'd like to make mine as good as possible before sending it out! So please, if you're into that sort of thing, I'd appreciate your help.
Thanks,
Karen
It's about a dinosaur, and is written like Kipling's How the Camel Got Its Hump...in other words, it's a humorous look at how a Stegosaurus might first have grown the plates on its back and spikes on its tail.
I know, I know...rhyming picture books are a hard sell. That's why I'd like to make mine as good as possible before sending it out! So please, if you're into that sort of thing, I'd appreciate your help.
Thanks,
Karen
(no particular reason for Tink; I just liked her.)