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hi! I'm in need of a beta reader for my MSS "the Missing Flower" A YA Fantasy. Need more info? Check out the query: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=162773
What I'm looking for is someone who can give a line-by-line review, telling me what works and what doesn't, fix my punctuation (I think I'm okay on the grammer side), look for plot holes and tell me how I can characterize better IF you notice a character that isn't characterized well enough.
xD Is that too much? is it also too much to ask that, if you do find all these problems, you give it to me gently? -Learns best by positive reinforcement- but if you can't be gentle thats okay too. ^_^ Just thought I'd add that just in case.
What I'm looking for is someone who can give a line-by-line review, telling me what works and what doesn't, fix my punctuation (I think I'm okay on the grammer side), look for plot holes and tell me how I can characterize better IF you notice a character that isn't characterized well enough.
xD Is that too much? is it also too much to ask that, if you do find all these problems, you give it to me gently? -Learns best by positive reinforcement- but if you can't be gentle thats okay too. ^_^ Just thought I'd add that just in case.
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