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Opinion's Needed!
So, I think this is one of the few times that I've actually posted a personal question. Most of the time I ask simply to see all of the different opinions out there. This time, I would love to see some detailed advice, if you wouldn't mind.
So here's my predicament. About a year ago I began with a small, simple outline for a quartet (Urban Fantasy). My outline included a young 15 year old boy that got thrown into the disaster he's in now. Even though I wanted it to be mostly light-hearted, I wanted some deep underlying tones to the story. Naturally, each book tried to out-do the other. It became deeper, darker, and more controversial. I'm now staring at the ending of the last book saying, "Oh fuck. This isn't for the YA audience." So here's the problem:
I wouldn't change a thing about my second, third, or fourth book. How can I make the first one on the same tone as the others without completely screwing the plot of the others? Since I'm looking at turning it to an adult audience, should I completely re-write the first book? Should I change the kids age so he's an actual adult? Grr. So many questions. Please do keep in mind that this is targeted towards Fantasy readers.
Specific Questions:
If I have more questions I'll add them. SO many it's hard to get them all down. If you have any other hints/tips, feel free to share!
All opinions are greatly appreciated
So, I think this is one of the few times that I've actually posted a personal question. Most of the time I ask simply to see all of the different opinions out there. This time, I would love to see some detailed advice, if you wouldn't mind.
So here's my predicament. About a year ago I began with a small, simple outline for a quartet (Urban Fantasy). My outline included a young 15 year old boy that got thrown into the disaster he's in now. Even though I wanted it to be mostly light-hearted, I wanted some deep underlying tones to the story. Naturally, each book tried to out-do the other. It became deeper, darker, and more controversial. I'm now staring at the ending of the last book saying, "Oh fuck. This isn't for the YA audience." So here's the problem:
I wouldn't change a thing about my second, third, or fourth book. How can I make the first one on the same tone as the others without completely screwing the plot of the others? Since I'm looking at turning it to an adult audience, should I completely re-write the first book? Should I change the kids age so he's an actual adult? Grr. So many questions. Please do keep in mind that this is targeted towards Fantasy readers.
Specific Questions:
- As a SF/F writer, what changes would you make sure to do if you were to re-write the book?
- Many adult readers think the "end of the world" stories are over-done. Should I completely hide the whole "The world could be destroyed if you refuse to help.."?
- On the same note, it seems that many people hate Legends. My MC is not the hero that is supposed to save the world, but his superiors manipulate him to believe he is. Do you see this as a problem?
- Should I change my MC's age? To be honest, getting into the mind of an adult male terrifies me. I designed my character around my younger brother, so his actions/thoughts are very easy for me. I'm not sure if I could say the same for a grown man.
- Point of View: Do you think First-person POV is fine in this market? I've always preferred writing in this style, but it seems a bit dated for adult books.
- Gore - I have a bit of gore in my book, but not too much. Should I add more, or do you think it is too small of a detail?
If I have more questions I'll add them. SO many it's hard to get them all down. If you have any other hints/tips, feel free to share!
All opinions are greatly appreciated
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