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I was hoping there is a particular wing where people in persistent vegetative states were moved to. One that your average reader would associate with such conditions.
For example, bring up the neonatal intensive-care unit, and there is a good chance your reader will be able to recognize it for what it is.
I ask this because I want to be more subtle about how the science fiction concept of my story is revealed. Rather than having it read like I am taking a break from the story to fill the reader in on the concept that this story is based on, I want to strongly hint at it instead. I thought that naming the wing and providing physical description of the patient and his/her condition could suffice and let me avoid coming out and saying that the person is in a persistent vegetative state or brain dead or something else that is, more or less, equivalent.
P.S. And I ask because my failure to find out via Google has me especially curious.
For example, bring up the neonatal intensive-care unit, and there is a good chance your reader will be able to recognize it for what it is.
I ask this because I want to be more subtle about how the science fiction concept of my story is revealed. Rather than having it read like I am taking a break from the story to fill the reader in on the concept that this story is based on, I want to strongly hint at it instead. I thought that naming the wing and providing physical description of the patient and his/her condition could suffice and let me avoid coming out and saying that the person is in a persistent vegetative state or brain dead or something else that is, more or less, equivalent.
P.S. And I ask because my failure to find out via Google has me especially curious.
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