5-word post: "The Sun Didn't Rise Today"

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!
Struggling to breathe, I search
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.




Another tremor. I feel this
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.




Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.




Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where....?
Then I saw the man
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?

Then I saw the man. His cold grey eyes stared into my own, and I
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?

Then I saw the man. His cold grey eyes stared into my own, and I whispered "Dad, where are we?"
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?

Then I saw the man. His cold grey eyes stared into my own, and I whispered "Dad, where are we?"

Wait! Dad died years ago!
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?

Then I saw the man. His cold grey eyes stared into my own, and I whispered "Dad, where are we?"

Wait! Dad died years ago! Terror, as I've never felt
 

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Still dark at eight o'clock. Whispers from the depths carry on. "Get to bed!" I light another smoke from the discarded butts overflowing from the kitchen ashtray. My fingers are shaking; stained red with the juice of rich ruby berries. My god! Wait, that's blood!

Struggling to breathe, I search the room for a vent. What happened to the vent? Where are the windows? suffocating...I need air.

Another tremor. I feel this cannot be my kitchen. Where am I, if not there?

Then I saw the man. His cold grey eyes stared into my own, and I whispered "Dad, where are we?"

Wait! Dad died years ago! Terror, as I've never felt before caused me to lose