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Denial is bliss
07-15-2005, 10:16 PM
I wrote it like 5 seconds ago it is a one shot with nothing to complicated more of a vent but what do you think? :Shrug:









You Were My Life









I canít remember



If you ever meant the world to me



But now that youíre gone



I know you do



I wrapped your love around me like a blanket



and now that your gone Iím freezing cold











CHOURUS



Baby, when I think about you I canít breathe (I canít breathe)



When I close my eyes your all that I see (All I see)



Thereís no way Iím going to sleep tonight



Because I canít deal with seeing your face



Right now











With you gone I have no one to talk to



Donít make me promise



Donít tell me I canít



Cut



I donít know what else to do



Because











CHOURUS



Baby, when I think about you I canít breathe (I canít breathe)



When I close my eyes your all that I see (All I see)



Thereís no way Iím going to sleep tonight



Because I canít deal with seeing your face



Right now











I just want to scream, to cry, to forget



But I canít











CHOURUS



Baby, when I think about you I canít breathe (I canít breathe)



When I close my eyes your all that I see (All I see)



Thereís no way Iím going to sleep tonight



Because I canít deal with seeing your face



Right now



(Fade away)

SLake
07-15-2005, 11:11 PM
You really had an inspirational burst there!

Sorry for this added comment, but it's only about your spelling, which you might want to check -- it's about not the inspirational lyrics. "You are" abbreviated or shortened is "you're," not "your" and there's a few other problem, not to mention "chorus." Sorry, I'm a just a darned writer. Keep up the great lyrics -- love to hear it being sung!