Critique and motivation (shared)

[FONT=&quot]Hello,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]My name is Dora, I write fantasy and currently working on a YA novel that’s loosely based on the Neolithic era; with some mythology and tribal beliefs mixed in.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I used to belong to a group that shared chapters each month for critiquing and I’m looking for something similar now. I’m open to any kind of criticism and will offer the same.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I can do critiques through e-mail or a private on-line venue, it’s up to you.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Things you should know about me:[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]English in my second language, so I might be having some problems with punctuation and/or grammar; I’m working very hard to remedy that.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]My work sometimes takes me out of town and might not have a pc. This usually doesn’t last more than a week so it should not be a problem, but just in case…[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I have one book published.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Feel free to ask me anything you want to see how we can make this work. [/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Thank you,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Dora[/FONT]

Thank you! I'll PM you with my e-mail and msn so we can discuss the details